The essay attached has several issue that need to be fixed. There is no clear thesis statement and it need ones. Also the structure needs fix there should be a intro, paragraph one on economics, two social life ex (Social end of feudalism) , third, political. Each should be linked up his improved the lives on Germany on a whole. How does this help people?The essay need to cooperate the attached chapter from Blackwell classic histories of Europe History of Germany 1780- 1918. That should be the foundation the other stuff in the essay should be secondary. It is a rewrite.